Great, loads better but rename the menu headings. The impression is the other pages are the finished article. They are your first draft. Rename this page. Edit so there is only one copy of each page. Front cover: you've lost the contents off the side move them in a fraction. Contents: I'd like a little more with the caption. A pun is good. Something funny or provocative to draw your audience. DPS: not keen on the drop shadow to solve the colour prob, still difficult to read. Pull quote is lost, needs to be instantly seen.
Great, loads better but rename the menu headings. The impression is the other pages are the finished article. They are your first draft.
ReplyDeleteRename this page. Edit so there is only one copy of each page.
Front cover: you've lost the contents off the side move them in a fraction.
Contents: I'd like a little more with the caption. A pun is good. Something funny or provocative to draw your audience.
DPS: not keen on the drop shadow to solve the colour prob, still difficult to read. Pull quote is lost, needs to be instantly seen.